Monday, 14 May 2012

Villanelle Refrains

As promised here are the refrains that I hope to turn into a brand new poem, writing it entirley online.  So Let me know which one you prefer and I'll start posting the results as soon as I can. As awlays all comments are gratefully received.

1)The bottles empty quicker every day
   Defining how I think and what I say.

2)Back then I always thought you were to blame,
   Yet ten years on I still dream of your name.

3)Everyone needs to piss and shit,
   So wipe your arse and deal with it.

4)Who we are and what we feel,
    Has no truth and is not real.

5)Time strips our small achievements of their gold
   Regardless of the way each day unfolds.

6)We're all in the pot and it's boiling,
   We're all meat in the sun and it's spoiling.

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